Science paper

Remember that science paper?....well i finished it, and turned it in to my teacher and got some really great feedback, as well as words of encouragement. I will soon began to start writing another draft, when i finish i will post both the rough draft and the most recent draft to monitor my improvement along this art adventure. While confrencing with my teacher about this paper, she was telling m although i did not fufill the requirement of length, i still talked a lot more about the chemistry aspects than other students, which makes it easier to make a better draft for i will only need to fluff it up a bit. But i am doing pretty well in the first part of my adventure, stay tuned for more interesting info and fun...